I really like the new image and think the colour scheme co ordinates with the front cover a lot more, giving a consistent house style. I also think the Facebook link and prize details make the contents page look more professional.
Audience Feedback - I like the image on this page but think that more of the space needs to be filled. I think adding in some more text and possibly another image would help fill this space. I think that the top right corner also looks a bit bare.
This is clear and professional looking, I would consider how to best use the space effectively- I think the image potentially takes up too much room and maybe needs some focus on positioning; in addition the heavy bold font is a little hard to read and seems quite bunched up with lots of free space then to the right- a little work on space and layout is all this needs as well as embedding some more pugs/images/pics to integrate into it
This is clear and professional looking, I would consider how to best use the space effectively- I think the image potentially takes up too much room and maybe needs some focus on positioning; in addition the heavy bold font is a little hard to read and seems quite bunched up with lots of free space then to the right- a little work on space and layout is all this needs as well as embedding some more pugs/images/pics to integrate into it
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